Carrick Capital · Creative

John · CC3

One pod a day — build its cards top to bottom. The rotation means you and the other buyer never run the same pod on the same day, and you cycle every pod by Friday. Graded on lead value & tier, not volume.

30 builds · Mon–Fri 6 / day · 4 static · 2 video Carrick Capital | #3 Grade: value / tier

Your week

Tier A is craft over volume — this is deliberately below Fred's 10/day. Every card is copy-constant: for statics the Layout is the only variable, for videos the Format is. That's how Week 2 learns what actually won.

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John · CC3P1P2P1P2P3
Carmela · CC5P2P1P3P1P2

P1 Identity & Authority · P2 Mechanism & Trust · P3 Product & Proof

Campaign Name = the card's ID. Every single build. It's how results map back to the hook — the first Copy button on every card is that name. The dark chip on each card is its predicted hook score, recorded before launch; Week 1 is testing whether that prediction holds.
Compliance — non-negotiable. Carrick is a credit broker, not a lender: lenders decide, never "we funded / we refinanced". Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved", "guaranteed", or "whole-of-market" (Carrick has a 50+ lender panel). Cards tagged reg #1 · illustrative must ship the disclaimer at the end of the primary text. Copy as written — no edits after approval.
Mon4 static · 2 videoP1 · Identity & Authority
CW1-ID-S01-L1Sreg #1 · illustrative100P1-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S01
Why this cell: Full calibrated formula. Shares body B1 with H03 + H06 — the hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S01-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My overdraft never moved in three years. Nobody could say why. A lender read it differently.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S01-L2Sreg #1 · illustrative100P1-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S01
Why this cell: Full calibrated formula. Shares body B1 with H03 + H06 — the hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: H ComparisonAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S01-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My overdraft never moved in three years. Nobody could say why. A lender read it differently.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S01-L3Sreg #1 · illustrative100P1-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S01
Why this cell: Full calibrated formula. Shares body B1 with H03 + H06 — the hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: O Process StepsAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S01-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My overdraft never moved in three years. Nobody could say why. A lender read it differently.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S01-L4Sreg #1 · illustrative100P1-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S01
Why this cell: Full calibrated formula. Shares body B1 with H03 + H06 — the hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: Y Claim CalloutAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S01-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My overdraft never moved in three years. Nobody could say why. A lender read it differently.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-V01-F1Vreg #1 · illustrative83P1-H04 · CCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-V01
Why this cell: ISOLATES FIRST-SINGULAR (vs H01) and tests the CAP-endorsed "Imagine £X" device. £250k is inside the range this funnel actually produces (98 leads requested exactly that).
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Voiceover + B-RollMood: ConsideredAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Imagine £250k.
0.0s VISUAL: Overhead, static — a filed set of accounts squared on a desk, one figure circled in pencil. Hand withdraws. (already settling) AUDIO: "Imagine two hundred and fifty thousand." TEXT: "Imagine £250k" ~1.0s VISUAL: Cut — same accounts, now being slid across a different desk. Nobody speaks. AUDIO: "Same accounts. The bank said no. Nobody read them twice." ~2.0s EVOLVE VISUAL: Slow push onto the circled figure. TEXT: → "50+ lenders · one set of accounts" 3.0s HANDOFF VISUAL: Pull back — a second reader picks the file up. AUDIO: "A different lender has a different appetite. That's the whole mechanism."
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-V01-F1
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
Your bank scores the business against one policy — its own. If it doesn't fit, the answer is no, and nobody has to explain it. A panel works the other way: the same accounts, read by more than one lender, each with different appetite. One of them may read it differently. The first check leaves no mark on your file, and the lender makes the final decision. Subject to lender approval.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-ID-V01-F2Vreg #1 · illustrative83P1-H04 · CCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-V01
Why this cell: ISOLATES FIRST-SINGULAR (vs H01) and tests the CAP-endorsed "Imagine £X" device. £250k is inside the range this funnel actually produces (98 leads requested exactly that).
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Solo SelfieMood: ConsideredAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Imagine £250k.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-ID-V01-F1, produced as Solo Selfie. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-V01-F2
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
Your bank scores the business against one policy — its own. If it doesn't fit, the answer is no, and nobody has to explain it. A panel works the other way: the same accounts, read by more than one lender, each with different appetite. One of them may read it differently. The first check leaves no mark on your file, and the lender makes the final decision. Subject to lender approval.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
Tue4 static · 2 videoP2 · Mechanism & Trust
CW1-MT-S02-L1Sreg #1 · illustrative100P2-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S02
Why this cell: Full formula, market-wide framing. "Almost nobody" is the SOFTENED form — the absolute "Nobody does" was an unprovable market claim (CAP 3.7). EXACTLY 16 words: do NOT re-add "me", it drops the score to 88. Same body B2.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S02-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My broker never showed the panel. Almost nobody does. The one that did got the deal.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S02-L2Sreg #1 · illustrative100P2-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S02
Why this cell: Full formula, market-wide framing. "Almost nobody" is the SOFTENED form — the absolute "Nobody does" was an unprovable market claim (CAP 3.7). EXACTLY 16 words: do NOT re-add "me", it drops the score to 88. Same body B2.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: H ComparisonAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S02-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My broker never showed the panel. Almost nobody does. The one that did got the deal.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S02-L3Sreg #1 · illustrative100P2-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S02
Why this cell: Full formula, market-wide framing. "Almost nobody" is the SOFTENED form — the absolute "Nobody does" was an unprovable market claim (CAP 3.7). EXACTLY 16 words: do NOT re-add "me", it drops the score to 88. Same body B2.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: O Process StepsAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S02-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My broker never showed the panel. Almost nobody does. The one that did got the deal.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S02-L4Sreg #1 · illustrative100P2-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S02
Why this cell: Full formula, market-wide framing. "Almost nobody" is the SOFTENED form — the absolute "Nobody does" was an unprovable market claim (CAP 3.7). EXACTLY 16 words: do NOT re-add "me", it drops the score to 88. Same body B2.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: Y Claim CalloutAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S02-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My broker never showed the panel. Almost nobody does. The one that did got the deal.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-V02-F1Vreg #1 · illustrative88⚡ interruptP2-H06 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-V02
Why this cell: Promoted from the scored P2 batch (88). VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot).
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: CinemaFormat: Voiceover + B-RollMood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — C/G — Environment + narrative cold open · person in shot
Connective: He deals copies of his accounts into twelve empty chairs → because → he was told it "went to the panel" and nobody could name a single reader.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Who has actually seen these?
0.0s VISUAL: A long boardroom table, TWELVE EMPTY CHAIRS. A man is ALREADY mid-walk down its length, dealing a printed copy of his accounts into each seat like playing cards. Two are down. He keeps going. AUDIO: "They said it went to the panel." TEXT: "Who has actually seen these?" [SFX: flat slap of paper on each chair] ~1.0s VISUAL: He reaches the end. Out of copies. Turns and looks back at twelve sets of accounts on twelve empty chairs. Nobody sat down. AUDIO: "Nobody could tell me who'd actually read them." ~2.0s EVOLVE VISUAL: Snap cut — same table, and now HANDS are reaching in and picking the copies up. TEXT: → "50+ lenders · named before you commit" 3.0s HANDOFF VISUAL: AUDIO: "If they can't tell you who read it, they aren't brokering. They're forwarding."
Shooting notes. Any long table, borrowed chairs, 12 printed copies. He must be mid-deal at frame one. The evolution needs only 2–3 pairs of hands shot tight and repositioned — you do NOT need 12 people. Keep the room plain; a staged boardroom reads as advertisement and costs retention.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-V02-F1
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
There's a difference between a broker and a forwarding address. One reads your accounts, picks the lenders whose appetite fits, and tells you why. The other sells your details and hopes. You can tell them apart with one question: name the lenders you approached for me. We'll do it in writing, before you commit. Paid by the lender, never by you. No mark on your file to start, and the lenders make the decision.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-MT-V02-F2Vreg #1 · illustrative88⚡ interruptP2-H06 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-V02
Why this cell: Promoted from the scored P2 batch (88). VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot).
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: CinemaFormat: Solo SelfieMood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — C/G — Environment + narrative cold open · person in shot
Connective: He deals copies of his accounts into twelve empty chairs → because → he was told it "went to the panel" and nobody could name a single reader.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Who has actually seen these?
→ Same hook + script as CW1-MT-V02-F1, produced as Solo Selfie. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-V02-F2
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
There's a difference between a broker and a forwarding address. One reads your accounts, picks the lenders whose appetite fits, and tells you why. The other sells your details and hopes. You can tell them apart with one question: name the lenders you approached for me. We'll do it in writing, before you commit. Paid by the lender, never by you. No mark on your file to start, and the lenders make the decision.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
Wed4 static · 2 videoP1 · Identity & Authority
CW1-ID-S03-L1S61P1-H06 · D · CONTROLCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S03
Why this cell: CONTROL — pure Carrick brand voice, no stakes, no outcome, third person. If this beats H01 the calibration does not transfer to a logical-slow buyer. Same body B1. Compliance: cleared as-is.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S03-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: The overdraft hasn't moved in three years. The business has grown 40%.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S03-L2S61P1-H06 · D · CONTROLCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S03
Why this cell: CONTROL — pure Carrick brand voice, no stakes, no outcome, third person. If this beats H01 the calibration does not transfer to a logical-slow buyer. Same body B1. Compliance: cleared as-is.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: H ComparisonAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S03-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: The overdraft hasn't moved in three years. The business has grown 40%.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S03-L3S61P1-H06 · D · CONTROLCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S03
Why this cell: CONTROL — pure Carrick brand voice, no stakes, no outcome, third person. If this beats H01 the calibration does not transfer to a logical-slow buyer. Same body B1. Compliance: cleared as-is.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: O Process StepsAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S03-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: The overdraft hasn't moved in three years. The business has grown 40%.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S03-L4S61P1-H06 · D · CONTROLCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S03
Why this cell: CONTROL — pure Carrick brand voice, no stakes, no outcome, third person. If this beats H01 the calibration does not transfer to a logical-slow buyer. Same body B1. Compliance: cleared as-is.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: Y Claim CalloutAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S03-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: The overdraft hasn't moved in three years. The business has grown 40%.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-V01-F3Vreg #1 · illustrative83P1-H04 · CCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-V01
Why this cell: ISOLATES FIRST-SINGULAR (vs H01) and tests the CAP-endorsed "Imagine £X" device. £250k is inside the range this funnel actually produces (98 leads requested exactly that).
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Text + B-RollMood: ConsideredAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Imagine £250k.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-ID-V01-F1, produced as Text + B-Roll. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-V01-F3
Text cards → Layout step
Your bank scores the business against one policy — its own. If it doesn't fit, the answer is no, and nobody has to explain it. A panel works the other way: the same accounts, read by more than one lender, each with different appetite. One of them may read it differently. The first check leaves no mark on your file, and the lender makes the final decision. Subject to lender approval.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-ID-V01-F4Vreg #1 · illustrative83P1-H04 · CCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-V01
Why this cell: ISOLATES FIRST-SINGULAR (vs H01) and tests the CAP-endorsed "Imagine £X" device. £250k is inside the range this funnel actually produces (98 leads requested exactly that).
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Green Screen (Commentary Overlay)Mood: ConsideredAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Imagine £250k.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-ID-V01-F1, produced as Green Screen (Commentary Overlay). Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-V01-F4
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
Your bank scores the business against one policy — its own. If it doesn't fit, the answer is no, and nobody has to explain it. A panel works the other way: the same accounts, read by more than one lender, each with different appetite. One of them may read it differently. The first check leaves no mark on your file, and the lender makes the final decision. Subject to lender approval.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
Thu4 static · 2 videoP2 · Mechanism & Trust
CW1-MT-S03-L1Sreg #1 · illustrative88P2-H04 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S03
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE at MOF (vs H01/H02). Same body B2 — hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S03-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My accounts sat with nobody for three weeks. No lender had even seen them.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S03-L2Sreg #1 · illustrative88P2-H04 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S03
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE at MOF (vs H01/H02). Same body B2 — hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: H ComparisonAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S03-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My accounts sat with nobody for three weeks. No lender had even seen them.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S03-L3Sreg #1 · illustrative88P2-H04 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S03
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE at MOF (vs H01/H02). Same body B2 — hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: O Process StepsAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S03-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My accounts sat with nobody for three weeks. No lender had even seen them.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S03-L4Sreg #1 · illustrative88P2-H04 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S03
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE at MOF (vs H01/H02). Same body B2 — hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: Y Claim CalloutAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S03-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My accounts sat with nobody for three weeks. No lender had even seen them.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-V01-F3Vreg #1 · illustrative90P2-H05 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-V01
Why this cell: Promoted from the scored P2 batch (90). Video concept.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Text + B-RollMood: DryAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Nobody would name their panel.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-MT-V01-F1, produced as Text + B-Roll. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-V01-F3
Text cards → Layout step
Before you use any commercial finance broker, ask three questions. Who is on your panel — by name. How are you paid, and by whom. And which lenders did you actually approach for me. Most will struggle with the second one. We'll answer all three in writing before you commit to anything: paid by the lender when you complete, never by you, and the same either way. The first check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-MT-V01-F4Vreg #1 · illustrative90P2-H05 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-V01
Why this cell: Promoted from the scored P2 batch (90). Video concept.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Green Screen (Commentary Overlay)Mood: DryAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Nobody would name their panel.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-MT-V01-F1, produced as Green Screen (Commentary Overlay). Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-V01-F4
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
Before you use any commercial finance broker, ask three questions. Who is on your panel — by name. How are you paid, and by whom. And which lenders did you actually approach for me. Most will struggle with the second one. We'll answer all three in writing before you commit to anything: paid by the lender when you complete, never by you, and the same either way. The first check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
Fri4 static · 2 videoP3 · Product & Proof
CW1-PP-S02-L1Sreg #1 · illustrative88P3-H04 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-PP-S02
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE — near stem-match to H01 minus the resolution. Same body B3. Third replication of this test across the week.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-S02-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My facility never fit the business it became. Nobody flagged it in three years.
SUPPORT: Outgrowing your facility isn't a mistake. It's arithmetic.
CTA TEXT: Have the panel review it

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most established businesses are carrying at least one facility that made sense when they signed it and doesn't now. That's not a reflection on how the business is run — it's what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. The facility that suited £600k doesn't suit £2m, and nobody rings to tell you. If the repayments are making your operational decisions, the structure is running the business. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-PP-S02-L2Sreg #1 · illustrative88P3-H04 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-PP-S02
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE — near stem-match to H01 minus the resolution. Same body B3. Third replication of this test across the week.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: H ComparisonAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-S02-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My facility never fit the business it became. Nobody flagged it in three years.
SUPPORT: Outgrowing your facility isn't a mistake. It's arithmetic.
CTA TEXT: Have the panel review it

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most established businesses are carrying at least one facility that made sense when they signed it and doesn't now. That's not a reflection on how the business is run — it's what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. The facility that suited £600k doesn't suit £2m, and nobody rings to tell you. If the repayments are making your operational decisions, the structure is running the business. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-PP-S02-L3Sreg #1 · illustrative88P3-H04 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-PP-S02
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE — near stem-match to H01 minus the resolution. Same body B3. Third replication of this test across the week.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: O Process StepsAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-S02-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My facility never fit the business it became. Nobody flagged it in three years.
SUPPORT: Outgrowing your facility isn't a mistake. It's arithmetic.
CTA TEXT: Have the panel review it

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most established businesses are carrying at least one facility that made sense when they signed it and doesn't now. That's not a reflection on how the business is run — it's what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. The facility that suited £600k doesn't suit £2m, and nobody rings to tell you. If the repayments are making your operational decisions, the structure is running the business. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-PP-S02-L4Sreg #1 · illustrative88P3-H04 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-PP-S02
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE — near stem-match to H01 minus the resolution. Same body B3. Third replication of this test across the week.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: Y Claim CalloutAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-S02-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My facility never fit the business it became. Nobody flagged it in three years.
SUPPORT: Outgrowing your facility isn't a mistake. It's arithmetic.
CTA TEXT: Have the panel review it

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most established businesses are carrying at least one facility that made sense when they signed it and doesn't now. That's not a reflection on how the business is run — it's what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. The facility that suited £600k doesn't suit £2m, and nobody rings to tell you. If the repayments are making your operational decisions, the structure is running the business. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-PP-V02-F1Vreg #1 · illustrative90P3-H03 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-PP-V02
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word vs H01/H02's 2) — third replication.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Voiceover + B-RollMood: AuthoritativeAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
The debt was in charge.
0.0s VISUAL: Overhead — a hand moves to sign off an order, then stops. Pen lifts away. (mid-motion) AUDIO: "I stopped saying yes to work." TEXT: "The debt was in charge." ~1.0s VISUAL: Cut — the same hand pulls up a repayment schedule instead. AUDIO: "Not because the work was bad. Because the repayments had already spent it." ~2.0s EVOLVE VISUAL: Snap to the total. TEXT: → "Consolidate before you scale" 3.0s HANDOFF VISUAL: Pen goes back down on the order. AUDIO: "Sequencing problem. Not an ambition problem."
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-V02-F1
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
You know what the next investment is. The problem isn't ambition — it's that the existing facilities are eating the cash you'd use to fund it. That's a sequencing problem, and refinancing first is the move. Nobody at the bank flags it, because it isn't their job. A lender on the panel can restructure it. No mark on your file to find out, and the lender makes the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-PP-V02-F2Vreg #1 · illustrative90P3-H03 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-PP-V02
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word vs H01/H02's 2) — third replication.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Solo SelfieMood: AuthoritativeAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
The debt was in charge.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-PP-V02-F1, produced as Solo Selfie. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-V02-F2
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
You know what the next investment is. The problem isn't ambition — it's that the existing facilities are eating the cash you'd use to fund it. That's a sequencing problem, and refinancing first is the move. Nobody at the bank flags it, because it isn't their job. A lender on the panel can restructure it. No mark on your file to find out, and the lender makes the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Carrick Capital · Week 1 Build Guide · John · generated from _carrick_w1_config.mjs